江汉学术 ›› 2015, Vol. 34 ›› Issue (2): 19-25.doi: 10.16388/j.cnki.cn42-1843/c.2015.02.003

• 教育部名栏_现当代诗学研究 • 上一篇    下一篇

“大国写作”或向往大是大非——以四个文本为例谈当代汉语长诗的写作困境

颜炼军   

  1. 浙江工业大学人文学院,杭州 310012
  • 收稿日期:2015-02-19 修回日期:2015-02-19 出版日期:2015-04-15 发布日期:2015-03-25
  • 作者简介:颜炼军,男,普米族,云南大理人,浙江工业大学人文学院讲师,博士。

Great Country Writing or Longing for Cardinal:Taking Four Samples to Discuss the Plight of Contemporary Chinese Long Poem Writing

YAN Lian-jun   

  1. School of Humanities,Zhejiang University of Technology,Hangzhou 310012,China
  • Received:2015-02-19 Revised:2015-02-19 Online:2015-04-15 Published:2015-03-25

摘要: 近几年诞生的四部汉语长诗或说大篇幅的诗歌作品:欧阳江河的《凤凰》、西川的《万寿》、柏桦的《史记》、萧开愚的《内地研究》,多半是诗歌强力“转向”所谓当代中国复杂生活现场的产物,它们显示了这一代诗人写作的一种集体性的转向。它们的横空出世,似乎满足了不少读者和批评家的期待,甚至满足了一些汉学家们寻找当代中国隐喻的需求。可就当代汉语长诗两个方面的困境——精确性和整体性,即技艺层面和观念层面而言,这些作品有诸多不足;从写作立场的角度看,在这些长诗写作中,诗人的非诗学立场没有成功地转换为词语立场,进而却对写作造成了干扰。一首理想的长诗,应该拨开“现实”的云雾,展开一幅令我们沉迷的新的语言“现实”,这才是它应追求的大是大非。

关键词: 长诗, 精确性, 整体性, 隐喻, 欧阳江河, 西川, 柏桦, 萧开愚

Abstract: Within recent years,four Chinese long poems came out: Phoenix by Ouyang Jianghe,Longevity by Xi Chuan, Historical Records by Bai Hua, Inland Research by Xiao Kaiyu,most of which were products of that poetry strongly“turning”to complex life scene of contemporary China,and they have shown a collective steering of writing in this generation poets. It seems to have met the expectations of many readers and critics,and even have met the needs of some sinologists to look for contemporary Chinese metaphor. However,as for the plights of two aspects of contemporary Chinese long poem,the accuracy and integrity,or in terms of skill and idea,these works have many deficiencies. As looking from writing position in their writing,their non-poetic stance has not successfully been converted to word position,yet has disturbed their writing. An ideal long poem should poke away the clouds of“reality”,and show us a new charming“reality” with language,this is the cardinal it should pursue .

Key words: long poem, accuracy, integrity, metaphor, Ouyang Jianghe, Xi Chuan, Bai Hua, Xiao Kaiyu

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